Comments on: Truth or Dare

By: Kendal Ashby

Kendal Ashby — Sat, 23 Jan 2010 14:46:56 +0000

Great set up and beginning. It draws me in and makes me want to read more. Already having a connection with the main character. Well done!

By: Shawntelle Madison

Shawntelle Madison — Thu, 21 Jan 2010 20:21:25 +0000

I loved this! So good! I feel into the story after the first paragraph. From those few words I wanted to know what would happen to her.

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uberVU - social comments — Thu, 21 Jan 2010 12:59:00 +0000

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By: danieford

danieford — Wed, 20 Jan 2010 00:07:58 +0000

Cate & Alexia – Thanks. I love those type of stories too.

By: Alexia Reed

Alexia Reed — Tue, 19 Jan 2010 21:18:39 +0000

Love the name! Interesting set up you have going and I am a mush for bestfriends fall for each other stories.

By: Cate Hart

Cate Hart — Tue, 19 Jan 2010 05:49:47 +0000

Cool Danie, I’m with Cynthia – love the best friend high school stories. Two most favorite movies – Somekind of Wonderful and Drive Me Crazy. Glad you’re making this a serial can’t wait to read what happens next!

By: danieford

danieford — Mon, 18 Jan 2010 20:24:54 +0000

Cynthia – More will definitely be revealed later. I’m glad you like what I have so far.

Stephanie – I changed her name a dozen times before it became that. I’m glad I settled on that one cause it definitely fits her.

By: danieford

danieford — Mon, 18 Jan 2010 20:22:18 +0000

Jeannie – they are in high school. It’s not that unusual here so it didn’t seem out of the ordinary to me plus Yves is a small diner/coney island style restaurant. You’ll find that Indigo is a bit maturer but still has the typical teenage moments.

I’ll say this – Indigo is a planner. And has everything mapped out. This romance/story is gonna definitely set her off her planning ways.

Thank you for taking the time to read and comment.

By: Jeannie Lin

Jeannie Lin — Mon, 18 Jan 2010 19:48:37 +0000

Awwww…nice. Go Morgan!

Just wondering though…there are hints that they’re in high school. At times she seemed like she must be older with her boss relying on her as the best waitress and all. Doesn’t seem typical of a part time high school job.

Nice start though. Lots of sympathy for Indigo, right off the bat.

By: Stephanie Draven

Stephanie Draven — Mon, 18 Jan 2010 19:05:58 +0000

How can you go wrong with a name like Indigo Jones?